This fits the criteria for KIDS FIRST! although, it should be noted that it is not a full screenplay. Strengths: Young people from different cultures in a school environment are the focal point. This 10 page vignette uses tamales and the more predictable packaged lunchables to make the point that something different is worth keeping and trying. Weaknesses: Dialogue is secondary to the extensive descriptions used for action scenes. Reviewed by Juror #11, KIDS FIRST!
This fits the criteria for KIDS FIRST! although, it should be noted that it is not a full screenplay. Strengths: Young people from different cultures in a school environment are the focal point. This 10 page vignette uses tamales and the more predictable packaged lunchables to make the point that something different is worth keeping and trying. Weaknesses: Dialogue is secondary to the extensive descriptions used for action scenes. Reviewed by Juror #11, KIDS FIRST!
Marie, a second-grader, asks her mom to buy her Lunchables just like the other kids at school. Mom decides to teach her a lesson.
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